Friday 26 July 2019
Cellphones at School
Billie, Kyra and I wrote our argument about weither cellphones should be allowed at school or not. We did the introduction together, then split of to write our own paragraphs. I did the first paragraph about eye health, Kyra did the second about getting distracted, and Billie did the third about cyber bullying. After we read over it and edited some of the spelling, we wrote the conclusion. Here is what we have now!
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Hi Hannah my name is Sammi, I am in Mamaku 3 at Grey Main school. I like how you used clear sentences in your writing. I remember when I didn't have to worry about that stuff when I was five. NSL: make your writing bigger.
ReplyDeleteHi Sammi, Thanks for the comment!
DeleteI know right, when i was in Mamaku, phones were the LEAST of my worries. Now it's pretty much the whole talk.
Thanks for the advice, I'll make sure to change the image size!
Kia Ora Hannah, It's Katelynn here from next door!!!
ReplyDeleteI totally agree, students should not be aloud cellphones at school. These are some great reasons on why students shouldn't have there cell phones and school. I like how you have clearly stated them.
Keep up the great work, Hannah!
Katelynn (From next door!!!)
Hi Katelynn!
DeleteThanks so much for the comment :)
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