For the past few weeks T2 have been writing myths and legends of our own. I was originally writing about Shooting Stars, but over time my plot became the reason that fireflies glow. Here is my finished writing!
Kia Ora Hannah! Thanks for sharing your wonderfully written myth! I know how hard you have worked on this and it is great to see the descriptive language that you have used to capture the audiences attention. Did you enjoy this activity? Keep up the great work. Miss H
Kia Ora My name is Zoe I go to Gisborne Intermediate in Gisborne. This blog post about Fireflies was very interesting and made me keep on reading. It looks like you have worked very hard on this. But maybe next time you could make the writing a bit bigger to make it easier to read. Ma te wa Zoe
Kia Ora Hannah!
ReplyDeleteThanks for sharing your wonderfully written myth! I know how hard you have worked on this and it is great to see the descriptive language that you have used to capture the audiences attention.
Did you enjoy this activity?
Keep up the great work.
Miss H
Hey Miss Hines,
DeleteThanks for the comment!
Yes I did really enjoy this activity, it was quite fun to come up with the characters and story line.
Hannah
Oh my gosh, that was quite a story! I was taken by surprise by the ending!
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Kia Ora
ReplyDeleteMy name is Zoe I go to Gisborne Intermediate in Gisborne.
This blog post about Fireflies was very interesting and made me keep on reading.
It looks like you have worked very hard on this.
But maybe next time you could make the writing a bit bigger to make it easier to read.
Ma te wa
Zoe
hi it is me Finn i like these blog because it has a god story and a good detail 👌
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