Friday 22 September 2017

Explanation Writing: How George made a glass horse.

Last week, I did my explanation plan. This week I finished my good copy. Here is my writing!!!!
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  1. Richard Hsieh22 September 2017 at 22:08

    Well done!
    In third paragraph close to the end, should it be melt "while" instead of melt well?

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