Friday, 9 June 2017

Literacy Reflection T2 W6

Word Work
This week I did word work. The hardest was silly sentences because I couldn't think of a silly way to write my sentences.



Power Writing

This week for power writing, Billie-Jean, Emil, Katelynn and I made a slide about the cutest animals and reasons why. I really enjoyed writing about my favorite animals and looking for adorable pictures. I some of mine have stories/memories about that type of animal. Next time, I think I will do a slide about my favorite foods.



9 comments:

  1. I really loved your slideshow. You all know lots about animals. And Blanket was the best dog ever, I agree whole-heartedly!

    ReplyDelete
  2. Hey Hannah!
    It was great to read your slide about cute animals, I agree, unicorns are so real! It was great to see you using describing words in your writing-it really helped me see why you loved the animals, even if I dont like some of the animals you were talking about. Maybe next time exspan to me what power writing is, I understood your side but I dint really know why you were doing it?
    Thanks!
    From Hannah,
    Yaldhurst Model School

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. Hello Hannah!
      Thanks for the awesome comment! I really enjoyed reading it. The reason that I made the slide was because me and my friends really like animals and we had free writing time. Since it was free, we were aloud to do anything. I decided to do this and I added my friends and it ended up totally awesome! I will be sure to use your advice on week 8 (because it's week 7 now) so thanks!

      From Hannah

      Delete
  3. Hi Hannah,
    I thought this was really good. Unicorns are real. I don't think there is anything you need to work on.

    Kind regards
    Julia
    Yaldhurst Model School

    ReplyDelete
  4. Hello Hannah,
    That is a lot of learning in your writing on one blog post, I guess you learning a lot from your teachers.

    From Jacob,
    Yaldhurst Model School

    ReplyDelete
  5. Hi Hannah,
    I love your slide and I agree with your you and your friends that those animals are so cute! My favourite animal from the slide is pugs! I have always loved pugs.

    Thanks,
    Ariana, Yaldhurst Model School.

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. Kia Ora, Ariana!
      I love pugs as well! They are my favorite animal and really do want one. Do you want one too?

      Thanks for the awesome comment!

      Hannah

      Delete
  6. It was great to read your slide about cute animals, I agree, unicorns are so real! It was great to see you using describing words in your writing-it really helped me see why you loved the animals, even if I dont like some of the animals you were talking about. Maybe next time exspan to me what power writing is, I understood your side but I dint really know why you were doing it?
    It will be great to see more of your stuff.
    Thanks!
    Base YMS

    ReplyDelete
    Replies
    1. Hello, Base! I noticed that your comment is pretty much the same as another girl named Hannah. So the reason why I was doing this is because I love animals and so do my friends. Thanks for the comment!

      Hannah

      Delete

Thank-you for your positive, thoughtful, helpful comment.