Friday, 26 July 2019

Cellphones at School

Billie, Kyra and I wrote our argument about weither cellphones should be allowed at school or not.  We did the introduction together, then split of to write our own paragraphs. I did the first paragraph about eye health, Kyra did the second about getting distracted, and Billie did the third about cyber bullying. After we read over it and edited some of the spelling, we wrote the conclusion. Here is what we have now!



1 comment:

  1. Hi Hannah my name is Sammi, I am in Mamaku 3 at Grey Main school. I like how you used clear sentences in your writing. I remember when I didn't have to worry about that stuff when I was five. NSL: make your writing bigger.

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