Friday, 9 June 2017

Literacy Reflection T2 W6

Word Work
This week I did word work. The hardest was silly sentences because I couldn't think of a silly way to write my sentences.



Power Writing

This week for power writing, Billie-Jean, Emil, Katelynn and I made a slide about the cutest animals and reasons why. I really enjoyed writing about my favorite animals and looking for adorable pictures. I some of mine have stories/memories about that type of animal. Next time, I think I will do a slide about my favorite foods.



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6 comments:

  1. Katrina Brown10 June 2017 at 00:22

    I really loved your slideshow. You all know lots about animals. And Blanket was the best dog ever, I agree whole-heartedly!

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  2. Anonymous14 June 2017 at 11:18

    Hey Hannah!
    It was great to read your slide about cute animals, I agree, unicorns are so real! It was great to see you using describing words in your writing-it really helped me see why you loved the animals, even if I dont like some of the animals you were talking about. Maybe next time exspan to me what power writing is, I understood your side but I dint really know why you were doing it?
    Thanks!
    From Hannah,
    Yaldhurst Model School

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  3. Anonymous14 June 2017 at 11:53

    Hi Hannah,
    I thought this was really good. Unicorns are real. I don't think there is anything you need to work on.

    Kind regards
    Julia
    Yaldhurst Model School

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  4. Anonymous14 June 2017 at 11:53

    Hello Hannah,
    That is a lot of learning in your writing on one blog post, I guess you learning a lot from your teachers.

    From Jacob,
    Yaldhurst Model School

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  5. Anonymous14 June 2017 at 11:53

    Hi Hannah,
    I love your slide and I agree with your you and your friends that those animals are so cute! My favourite animal from the slide is pugs! I have always loved pugs.

    Thanks,
    Ariana, Yaldhurst Model School.

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  6. Anonymous14 June 2017 at 14:38

    It was great to read your slide about cute animals, I agree, unicorns are so real! It was great to see you using describing words in your writing-it really helped me see why you loved the animals, even if I dont like some of the animals you were talking about. Maybe next time exspan to me what power writing is, I understood your side but I dint really know why you were doing it?
    It will be great to see more of your stuff.
    Thanks!
    Base YMS

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