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Wednesday, 6 March 2019
The Mines Afire! Diary Entry
I have been working on a fake diary entry. We had to write diary entry about our feelings if our dad or brother or husband died in the mine disaster. Here is my finished product!
I was touched by that diary entry. I could picture the mother and daughter at the funeral together. You have a beautiful style to your writing of feelings.
I remember when we were at Grey High and they put on a play about the Brunner Mine. Aunty Mel had a part where she had to cry all the time. It was an emotional play.
Hi Hannah,
ReplyDeleteI was touched by that diary entry. I could picture the mother and daughter at the funeral together. You have a beautiful style to your writing of feelings.
I remember when we were at Grey High and they put on a play about the Brunner Mine. Aunty Mel had a part where she had to cry all the time. It was an emotional play.
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